Tried out the game today. Really promising start. The character art is pretty good. I like that it doesn't shy away from the sex or that the characters are pretty unhinged. They clearly have issues which impact how quickly they get attached and that is neat. I like how there is a route for each and a threesome route.
I think the way the backgrounds are done has to change. Either with art or a softer pixelization because it can be really jarring with some of them.
Played it and it actually sounds good!! The game dialogue isn't rigid for a demo and the characters are intriguing, especially Mike, its silly but I found it cute when there is a chance to romance him, along with Zander. If you continued this and need some help with the writing, I would love to help you with the writing because it actually is good novel format!!
Ahhhh omg thank you I would love that Also I just finished Zanders route and there is some Zander x Mike x You moments and also I manly redid Zander and Mike bathtub scene and slightly edited the others if you wanna hop back in and check it out
I'd say it's more explicit with the dialogue scenes!! I just noticed more oddities but I think I would rather say it in a dm or so ! (my discord is r_c1980) but other main things are very cool if you ask me, though I do think there should be more built up transition between the romancing of the characters, i.e: more options to say yes or no if we as the MC would continue since it is a little abrupt from the way we're already close to them and maybe add more more character designs for the scenes for Zander and Mike!! Otherwise, all of this is pretty functional and pretty great with the atmosphere!
:0 yes I think I got a little to excited and wanted to get all my favorite scene out of the way and choice branches are super hard for me ngl lol but I think I have gotten the hang of it better atleast a little lol. I'll try and work on that oh and I have been working on more designs for mike and zander cause it looks kinda sad with them just standing there blank face while their talking lmao. Thank you
This looks promising, the art looks like a tasty steak, so beefy and thick!! I'll be playing this and saving this for future plays, is the main character customizable or is it a set gender? Anyhow, I'll be sure to comment again to let you know what I think!!
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Tried out the game today. Really promising start. The character art is pretty good. I like that it doesn't shy away from the sex or that the characters are pretty unhinged. They clearly have issues which impact how quickly they get attached and that is neat. I like how there is a route for each and a threesome route.
I think the way the backgrounds are done has to change. Either with art or a softer pixelization because it can be really jarring with some of them.
Will be watching this with great interest.
It's so refreshing to see new and unique artstyles show up. Good luck with the development, I'm looking forward to more!!
Played it and it actually sounds good!! The game dialogue isn't rigid for a demo and the characters are intriguing, especially Mike, its silly but I found it cute when there is a chance to romance him, along with Zander. If you continued this and need some help with the writing, I would love to help you with the writing because it actually is good novel format!!
Ahhhh omg thank you I would love that Also I just finished Zanders route and there is some Zander x Mike x You moments and also I manly redid Zander and Mike bathtub scene and slightly edited the others if you wanna hop back in and check it out
OOH YES SURE!!
what did you think if you have played it already?
I'd say it's more explicit with the dialogue scenes!! I just noticed more oddities but I think I would rather say it in a dm or so ! (my discord is r_c1980) but other main things are very cool if you ask me, though I do think there should be more built up transition between the romancing of the characters, i.e: more options to say yes or no if we as the MC would continue since it is a little abrupt from the way we're already close to them and maybe add more more character designs for the scenes for Zander and Mike!! Otherwise, all of this is pretty functional and pretty great with the atmosphere!
:0 yes I think I got a little to excited and wanted to get all my favorite scene out of the way and choice branches are super hard for me ngl lol but I think I have gotten the hang of it better atleast a little lol. I'll try and work on that oh and I have been working on more designs for mike and zander cause it looks kinda sad with them just standing there blank face while their talking lmao. Thank you
This looks promising, the art looks like a tasty steak, so beefy and thick!! I'll be playing this and saving this for future plays, is the main character customizable or is it a set gender? Anyhow, I'll be sure to comment again to let you know what I think!!
This looks amazing. I love the art! Can't wait to play it. :D
:^ ahhhh tell me what you think I am pretty much a beginner to writing in visual novels and drawing